changing the type face, size, alignment and shape of the text helped a lot - the text matches the images much better now i think. an index would be nice at the end but do i have enough objects for that? this is ready to print soon. i'll print on cardstock and glue bind it.
some images cut off at right; interesting effect — any significance?
ReplyDeletemaybe reduce space between paragraphs: now two empty lines, one would suffice.
you're welcome to try manual typewriter. sometimes use of rough typewriter (or other physical graphic) together with neat/digital generated type (for details, e.g., even a bar code) can work.
index a good idea: depending on how its written, it can supplement what's in the body/caption copy, add another dimension, also draw connections between unlike things/images.
title is a little flat, for the evocative images and text inside.
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